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未能达到预期的写作目的。第一档(1一3分)遗漏或未清楚表述大部分内容要点，或大部分内容与写作目的不相关。—所使用的词汇有限，语法结构单调，错误很多，严重影响理解。几乎没有使用语句间衔接手段，全文结构不清晰，意义不连贯。完全未达到预期的写作目的。零分未作答；所写内容太少或无法看清以致无法评判；所写内容与题目要求完全不相关。第二节：参考范文：A week later,I went to return the book,only to find an old lady locking the door.Ichecked my watch and saw it wasn't closing time yet,so I asked her.She didn't speak butpointed to a notice on the foam board on the wall.The board showed the library's closingtime:2 pm.I was puzzled and asked when the closing time had changed.She said that it hadnever changed and that the closing time had always been 2 pm.I was shocked at the fact."Then why did the library close around 4 pm during the last few weeks?"I asked.Shesmiled and said,"So you are that child."She told me the library indeed closed late the pastfew weeks because the old man said there was a child who needed to study...At that moment,I was stunned,and my nose felt a bit sour.I looked up to hold back my tears,and a ray ofsunlight shone on my face.The sunlight was warm.It was a typical southern winter day,windless and chilly,but the sunlight was spreading across the earth一、评分原则1.本题总分为25分，按五个档次进行评分。2.评分时，应主要从内容、词汇语法和篇章结构三个方面考虑，具体为：(1)创造内容的质量，续写的完整性以及与原文情境的融洽度。(2)使用词汇和语法结构的准确性、恰当性和多样性。(3)上下文的衔接和全文的连贯性。3.评分时，先根据作答的整体情况初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来综合衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。4.评分时还应注意：(1)词数少于120个的，酌情扣分。(2)单词拼写和标点符号是写作规范的重要方面，评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。(3)书写较差以致影响交际的，酌情扣分。二、各档次的给分范围和要求第五档(21一25分)【高三英语·参考答案第9页（共10页）】